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NOTEBOOK - NOTE #C4: STEPS IN WRITING
AN ESSAY
1. Analyze the Question.
-- Look at the direction words or phrases in the essay title
which give you instructions about what you are expected to write. Listed
below are some commonly found direction words, with explanation of the
action required:
| COMPARE |
Show the similarities and
differences. |
| CONTRAST |
Show only the differences. |
| CRITICISE |
Give your judgment of
something, showing its positive and negative points. |
| DEFINE |
Give the formal meaning by
distinguishing it from related terms. |
| DISCUSS |
Describe, giving the details, and
explaining the positive/negative aspects of the issue. |
| EVALUATE |
Give your opinion, stating the
advantages and disadvantages. |
| EXPLAIN |
State the ‘how’ and the
‘why’. |
| IDENTIFY |
Define, then show its
importance. |
| RELATE |
Show the connections between
items/issues, explaining how one affects the other, or is like
another. |
| SUMMARIZE |
Condense the points or facts. Omit the
details. |
| TRACE |
Show a progression, historical sequence
or development. |
2. Plan --
Brainstorm and chart what you know / you need to know. You might make a
map, putting the question in the middle of the map and making ‘spokes’ or
‘rays’ leading from the central hub. These spokes could represent
different aspects that are relevant to the question.
Ask yourself questions about issues relating to
the essay question. This will help to put you into the right frame of mind
for the research in Step Three.
3. Research -- This is the
step most people think of when they think of "library research." It's a
hunt for information in any available form (book, periodical, CD, video,
Internet) which is pertinent to the questions identified in step 2.
Consult Note #7 for
more information about library sources.
Your information search should be
focused and specific, but pay careful attention to serendipity (finding,
by chance, valuable things you weren't even looking for). Keep your mind
open to continue learning about your focused topic.
Now is the time to carefully record
your sources in the bibliographic format required by your instructor.
Every piece of information you collect should have bibliographic
information written down before you leave the library. You should also pay
attention to the quality of the information you find, especially if you're
using information you find on the Internet. Consult Note #28 for more
information on this topic.
4. Outline your Essay
--
Ask yourself: What is the major point I would
like to get across? What are the most convincing pieces of evidence I have
to back up my point? How can I divide these into sub-categories? What are
my most intriguing bits of information? How do they relate to each other
and to my thesis? In what order would it make the most sense to put these
ideas? What is my rationale for putting my ideas in this particular order?
Is there another possible order to put these ideas in? Why did I choose
this way of organizing my ideas as opposed to another way?
- Begin your outline by writing your topic at
the top of the page.
- Next, write the Roman numerals I, II, and
III, spread apart down the left side of the page.
- Next to each Roman numeral, write the main
ideas that you have about your topic, or the main points that you want
to make.
If you are trying to persuade, you
want to write your best arguments.
- If you are trying to explain a process,
you want to write the steps that should be followed.
You will
probably need to group these into categories. If you have trouble
grouping the steps into categories, try using Beginning, Middle, and
End.
- If you are trying to inform, you want to
write the major categories into which your information can be
divided.
- Under each Roman numeral, write A, B, and C
down the left side of the page.
- Next to each letter, write the facts or
information that support that main idea.
5. Write the thesis statement
-- Now that you have decided, at least tentatively, what information you
plan to present in your essay, you are ready to write your thesis
statement.
The thesis statement tells the reader what the
essay will be about, and what point you, the author, will be making.
You must look at your outline and decide what point you will be making.
What do the main ideas and supporting ideas that you listed say about your
topic? The tesis statement will have two parts: the first part states the
topic and the second part states the point of the essay.
Once you have formulated a thesis statement
that fits this pattern and with which you are comfortable, you are ready
to continue.
6. Write the main part of the
essay --
In the body of the essay, all the
preparation up to this point comes to fruition. The topic you have chosen
must now be explained, described, or argued.
Each main idea that you wrote down in your
diagram or outline will become one of the body paragraphs. If you had
three or four main ideas, you will have three or four body
paragraphs.
However, if you have collected a lot of
important information about a particular aspect, you might have several
paragraphs about one aspect. In this case, the paragraphs will each
consist of a subdivision of that aspect.
Try to link each paragraph to the next, so that
your writing will flow smoothly. Use transition words and phrases (e.g.
however, therefore, also, in addition to, and, on the other hand) to make
the transitions between paragraphs.
Each paragraph will have roughly the same
structure:
Start by writing down one of your
main ideas, in sentence form. If your main idea is "reduces freeway
congestion," you might say this: Public transportation reduces
freeway congestion.
Next, write down each of your supporting
points for that main idea, but leave four or five lines in between each
point.
In the space under each point, write down
some elaboration for that point. Elaboration can be further
description or explanation or discussion.
If you wish, include a summary sentence for
each paragraph. This is not generally needed, however, and such
sentences have a tendency to sound stilted, so be cautious about using
them.
Once you have fleshed out each of your body
paragraphs, one for each main point, you are ready to continue.
7. Write the Conclusion
--
- Do not include any new information or ideas
at this stage.
- Make a reference to the essay question which
shows that you have taken the action required.
- Summarize briefly the main content of the
essay.
- Show your own opinion.
8. Write the Introduction
--
The introduction should be designed to attract
the reader's attention and give her an idea of the essay's focus. Begin
with an attention grabber.
The attention grabber you use is up to you, but
here are some ideas:
- Startling information
This information
must be true and verifiable, and it doesn't need to be totally new to
your readers. It could simply be a pertinent fact that explicitly
illustrates the point you wish to make. If you use a piece of
startling information, follow it with a sentence or two of
elaboration.
- Anecdote
An anecdote is a story that
illustrates a point. Be sure your anecdote is short, to the point,
and relevant to your topic. This can be a very effective opener for your
essay, but use it carefully.
- Dialogue
An appropriate dialogue does not
have to identify the speakers, but the reader must understand the point
you are trying to convey. Use only two or three exchanges between
speakers to make your point. Follow dialogue with a sentence or two
of elaboration.
- Summary Information
A few sentences
explaining your topic in general terms can lead the reader gently to
your thesis. Each sentence should become gradually more specific, until
you reach your thesis.
- If the attention grabber was only a sentence
or two, add one or two more sentences that will lead the reader from
your opening to your thesis statement.
- Finish the paragraph with your thesis
statement.
9. Edit the Essay -- Check the following:
Content
- Is it relevant?
- Should you have included or omitted
anything else?
- Is it repetitive?
- Have you referred to, acknowledged and
linked sources which you used to support your ideas and
arguments?
- Have you expressed your own viewpoint
where required?
Organization
- Introduction: Is your aim clear and
does it show that you have understood the title?
- Have you explained the sequence you intend
to follow?
- Body (general): Does the body of
the essay support the thesis (or aim)?
- Do the references support your
arguments?
- Body (paragraphs): Does every
paragraph relate to the thesis of the essay?
- Do the paragraphs follow a logical
order?
- Do all paragraph provide good details,
well-chosen examples etc?
- Are the topic sentences clear?
- Have you linked the paragraphs by
- repeating key words/ideas from the title
or thesis
- referring to words/ideas from the
preceding paragraph
- using ‘transitional’ expressions, eg A
second example ..., In contrast, ....etc?
- Conclusion: Does the essay just ‘tail
off’?
- Have you summed up your most important
points from the body of your essay?
- Have you referred back to the essay title
and thesis and shown that you have carried out the task in
question?
Style
- Have you written in a fairly formal, not a
casual chatty style?
Grammar
- Allow a couple of extra days for editing;
you will be more likely to find mistakes if the essay looks less
familiar to you
- Ask a friend to help you proof-read
- Be alert for the following:
- Are the verb tenses and nouns/pronouns
consistent? eg The pupils who ................. have ( not
has).
- Is it clear to what/whom pronouns refer?
eg The children used books to help them to perform the tasks.
They were very active .. The underlined word refers to
the last thing mentioned in the previous sentence, ie
tasks. However, the writer intended it to refer to
children, so he/she will need to repeat The
children ...
- Are the sentences varied in length and
type?
Punctuation
- Does the punctuation make the meaning
clear?
Spelling
- Use the word processor's spell checker
and check for spelling errors manually
Instructions for the assignment
- Are your margins correct?
- Have you titled it as directed?
- What other information (name, date, etc.)
must you include?
- Did you space your lines correctly?
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